Reasons I Was Moved
- - The author brought up points that brought up points that made me wonder why I got an iPod.
- - The use of facts and statistics in the paper gave more power and substance to the argument
- - References to how the iPod may advance mad me consider the future of the product
- - The different attractive features of the iPod mentioned helped show why it is popular
- - Giving reasons how the iPod became the most popular music plaver, over its competitors
- - The papr talked about the premise of “cool” and how that helped the iPods popularity
Reasons I Was Unmoved
- - There were parts when the paper felt repetitive
- - There were occasionally unnecessary words that took out of the flow of the writing
- - At times the paper read more like an informational paper on the iPod than a comparison to society
- - Did not talk about iPods with an older generation
- - Focused on younger generations instead of a whole
- - The paper had a focus on the capabilities and advances of the iPod, but not why they where there or what the said about society
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